考官评语
Fluency & Coherence/score 6.5
Natural and confident in
speaking manner , ideas are balanced
and smoothly linked
Lexical Resource/score 3.5
mostly good, tried to give , p2 too short
specific detail on ideas though occasionally
slipped to basic. eg delicious
Grammatical Range and Accuracy/score 3.5
Fairly accurate minor slips in
tense . especially p2
Pronunciation/score 6.5
clear and coherent
throughout“idea“became “Idill“
文法纠错
错误1:应为Australia,或者in an Australian family
错误2:应该在Australian family前加上不定冠词an
错误3:Also在这里用得不是很恰当,因为前后两
句话之间并不是并列关系。
错误4:这句话应该这样表达:There was a growth of 5 dollars in...或者There was a 5-dollar growth in
错误5:Especially在这里用的也比较牵强,因为
前后两句话是分别描述两个花费上升的项目,并
没有“特别是”这样的概念。
错误6:应为a slight increase,“there be”句
型表达数据变化应该用形容词搭配名词
错误7:“spending”后应该接介词on
错误8:“of total expenditure”多余,应去掉
错误9:介词应该用to而不是up
错误10:应该用介词on
错误11:整句话的表达应改为:Australian families
spent 10 dollars less on clothing which fell from
30 dollars to 20 dollars.
错误12:“of total expenditure”多余。
错误13:应改为大写Meanwhile,后接逗号。
错误14:时态错误,应该为made
错误15:去掉large number of
错误16:应为almost all expenditures
错误17:介词错误,应为on