如果在
雅思写作中有几个漂亮的长句,那会为你对的写作提分不少,那么到底该如何撰写呢?想必是很多烤鸭的心态,这里思润老师和大家分享一些实际有效的方法,让你的句子更加漂亮地道,争取拿到雅思高分。
首先大家可以先简单句,一般主谓结构的大家都还是比较擅长的。
比如:ThenumberofJapanesetouristswhotravelledabroadincreased.
然后添加数词
ThenumberofJapanesetouristswhotravelledabroadincreasedfrom5millionto15million.
接下来可以添加一些状语,比如时间和原因之类的:
ThenumberofJapanesetouristswhotravelledabroadincreasedfrom5millionto15millionbetween1985and1995.
确定数字的准确性,如:
ThenumberofJapanesetouristswhotravelledabroadincreasedfromjustunder5milliontoaround15millionbetween1985and1995.
建议贵粉儿们添加一个副词
ThenumberofJapanesetouristswhotravelledabroadincreaseddramaticallyfromjustunder5milliontoaround15millionbetween1985and1995.
还可以以名词结构复述
ThenumberofJapanesetouristswhotravelledabroadincreaseddramaticallyfromjustunder5milliontoaround15millionbetween1985and1995,ariseofabout10millionin10years.
最终改写成:
TherewasadramaticincreaseinthenumberofJapanesetouristswhotravelledabroadfromjustunder5milliontoaround15millionbetween1985and1995,ariseofabout10millionin10years.
这样的长句你会写了么,再长可就有些繁琐了哦,所以大家谨记想要写长句就从简单句开始,在加上数字、时间等内容,轻松搞定完美长句