雅思写作时的几个原则

雅思写作一直都是中国考生的弱项，如果考生写出来的作文结构不合理，词汇单调贫乏，句型结构缺乏变化，语法错误频出，便无法拿到高分。今天小思整理了一套关于英文写作的10个核心准则，一起来学习一下。

1段落与观点

Maketheparagraphtheunitofcomposition:oneparagraphtoeachtopic

不同的段落构成文章，每个段落仅传递一个观点

2主题句做开头

A.thetopicsentencecomesatornearthebeginning

每个段落均以主题句开头，并且首尾呼应

B.thesucceedingsentencesexplainorestablishordevelopthestatementmadeinthetopicsentence

段落围绕主题句展开，后面的句子对主题句进行展开解释

C.thefinalsentenceeitheremphasizesthethoughtofthetopicsentenceorstatessomeimportantconsequence.

末尾句或者对主题句进行强调，或者阐述主题句带来的结果

3多用主动句

主动句永远比被动句直接有力

Eg:Therewereagreatnumberofdeadleaveslyingontheground

=Deadleavescoveredtheground(清晰生动)

Eg:Thereasonthatheleftcollegewasthathishealthbecameimpaired.

=Failinghealthcompelledhimtoleavecollege(简洁有力)

Eg:Itwasnotlongbeforehewasverysorrythathehadsaidwhathehad.

=Hesoonrepentedhiswords(简洁有力)

4肯定的形式表达否定

避免使用平淡、毫无色彩，含糊其辞的语言

Eg：Hewasnotveryoftenontime.

=Heusuallycamelate.

Eg:HedidnotthinkthatstudyingLatinwasmuchuse.

=HethoughtthestudyofLatinuseless.

5删除冗词

有力的写作一定简洁

Owingtothefactthat

=Since(because)

Inspiteofthefactthat

=Though(although)

Callyourattentiontothefactthat

=Remindyou(notifyyou)

6别写流水账

寻找语言的逻辑关系

通过who,which,when,where,andwhile这些词把句子串起来。

7讲究对称美

内容对等，结构一致

Eg:Formerly,sciencewastaughtbythetextbookmethod,whilenowthelaboratorymethodisemployed.

Parallelstructure:Formerly,sciencewastaughtbythetextbookmethod;nowitistaughtbythelaboratorymethod.

8遵循物以类聚

意思关联紧密的词放在一块

A:主谓之间不分割，补充信息需前置

Eg:Wordsworth,inthefifthbookofTheExcursion,givesaminutedeionofthischurch.

Eg:InthefifthbookoftheExcursion,Wordsworthgivesaminutedeionofthischurch(状语前置，主谓毗邻)

B：关系代词紧随先行词出现

Eg:Therewasalookinhiseyethatbodedmischief.

Eg:Inhiseyewasalookthatbodedmischief(名词look先行，关系词that紧随)

9保持时态一致

nsummaries,keeptoonetense

总结通常使用现在时态，如果使用过去时，请保持时态一致。

10圆周句

圆周句中，强调信息后置

Eg:Fourcenturiesago,ChristopherColumbus,oneoftheItalianmarinerswhomthedeclineoftheirownrepublicshadputattheserviceoftheworldandofadventure,seekingforSpainawestwardpassagetotheIndiesassetoffagainsttheachievementsofPortuguesediscoverers,lightedonAmerica.

Eg:WiththesehopesandinthisbeliefIwouldurgeyou,layingasideallhindrance,thrustingawayallprivateaims,todevoteyourselvesunswervinglyandunflinchinglytothevigorousandsuccessfulprosecutionofthiswar.

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