雅思作文第三段书写示范

具体书写方式见一下范例，希望能够帮助到大家。

As far as communication is concerned, the using of computers is by no means detrimental.

产生不好的影响：

negative effect  

dehumanizing effect

detrimental effect

deleterious       

Why should computers be singled out as particularly deleterious?

出现问句，达到“句式多变”的高分必备要求

Single out 挑选出

What matters is not whether or not we communicate in the orthodox or traditional ways but the very fact that we do communicate.

orthodox 规范的、普遍赞许的、正统的

尾段：再次重申观点

Computer is but a tool, the misuse of which it is not responsible for.

以定语从句结尾，全文中出现了五种句式,除了普通的陈述句式之外，还出现了：

（1）动词的分词引导的状语从句：

Invented some 60 years ago, computers have already transformed the way most of us live.

（2）一般疑问句

Why should computers be singled out as particularly deleterious?

（3）定语从句

Communication is made easy by technology, which promises infinite possibilities ahead.

（4）部分省略句

Indeed, many feel isolated and lonely in the midst of crowds or even while talking to others because they are trapped in their own world or because others are in theirs.

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