观点类雅思高分作文写作思路分享

今天思润小编为大家分享观点类雅思高分作文写作思路，希望能够帮助大家雅思作文稳拿高分。

范例：

Nowadays computers are widely used in education. As a result, some people think teachers no longer play an important role in classrooms. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that machine translation is highly developed in today’s society. Therefore it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. What’s your opinion?

University should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that it is the responsibility of the government to ensure that people in the country have healthy lifestyles. Other people believe that individuals should be free to decide their own lifestyles. Please give your opinion.

标志性文字：

Do you agree or disagree?

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

What’s your opinion?

Please give your own opinion.

重点在于：就题目讨论的问题，给出自己的观点

结构构思：

1. 传统的写作思路: 第一段亮出观点，然后分段给出不同的论据，最后一段收尾，总结全文，同时再次重申自己的观点

2. 高分作文，在于文字（词汇、句型、观点）方面制造亮点，不在于在结构方面铤而走险尝试新的方式

范文讲解1：

Nowadays people can use computers to talk, learn and communicate without leaving home. There is a danger that it will cause more isolation and a lack of communication among people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

写作思路：

1.观点：电脑不会妨碍人和人之间的交流

小提示：科技类的文章，尽量选择正观点，讲述科技为人类做出的贡献为佳

2. 论据:

(1). 不能狭隘地理解交流和隔阂，在电脑屏幕前花很多的时间不等于缺乏与世隔绝，

Communication and isolation must not be defined in a narrow sense. Alienation of people is not caused by how little they talk or meet each other but by lack of interest in our fellow creatures or the world at large.

隔绝、疏远： isolation  alienation

(2). 计算机让大家有了共同的兴趣，促进了人们之间的共鸣

common 共同的

Computers help to prevent isolation by bringing every possible field of interest onto the screen. You can broaden your interests and enrich your life by accessing whatever and whoever you are interested in. 

(3). 不同的时代有不同的交流方式，电脑就是当今时代的交流工具之一

Our mode of communication is forever changing and computers represent the latest way of communication.

远古时代： primitive primeval times   shouts and gestures 呐喊和手势

后来： 文字和语言 spoken and written language

现代： we prefer emails to ordinary mails, chat room, forum, tele-conference 

(4). 互联网让我们时时刻刻都连接在一起，一切都可以在指尖上实现

The Internet keeps us linked to each other all the time. Everything is at the touch of a fingertip.

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