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范文讲解

As science and technology contribute most to the development of society, science students should get more financial support from government than students in other fields (eg. business, language, etc.). To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

第一步：

确定观点：反对该观点

第二步：确定论据：

（1）尽管科技取得了很多成就，甚至是很多的奇迹，仍然有很多问题让科技无能为力

Notwithstanding the achievements and miracles made possible by science, numerous issues cannot be solved by science or technology.

Notwithstanding = despite

举例：青少年犯罪juvenile delinquency

种族歧视racial discrimination

道德水平下降moral degradation

the decline of moral standards

（2）一个学生能得到的经济援助应该由其学业成绩来决定

The amount of financial aid should be based on the students’ academic performance

第一段：

Never in history was science and technology so emphasized as in modern society.

开篇使用倒装句，吸引眼球，达到句式多变的要求

However, this lopsided emphasis seems ungrounded.

Lopsided 不平衡的

Ungrounded groundless  

This inordinate concern was quite groundless.

用简单的语言，亮出自己的观点。

第二段：

It is quite debatable that science and technology contribute more to human progress.

可商榷的、有异议的

debatable

arguable

questionable

Consensus has yet to be reached concerning ….

Modern people are more often plagued by problems of the heart, instead of the body.

Plague 折磨

Trouble, bother, haunt, harass

This problem of air pollution has haunted every one in the city.

The material wealth generated by science and technology often pales against the peace of mind brought by art or literature.

pale against 显得苍白无力

特别提醒：文章中一定要使用一定量的介词短语，以体现词汇量的丰富性(lexical resource)

第三段：

Grants or scholarships should not be lavished upon those without real interest in or dedication to a scholarly pursuit, whereas those with real potential should be offered adequate financial support lest they get distracted by working part time to pay for their education.

用or引导同义词或近义词，来展示词汇量

grants or scholarship

interest in or dedication to

lest以免

foremost 最重要的

第四段：

In a larger sense, all subjects are vital to human progress.

Vital 至关重要的

Very important

Vitally important

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