“优势类”范文讲解（1）

优势类范文讲解1：

Some people think that bicycle is the best way to travel from place to place. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the bicycle.

写作思路：

1. 文章分成四段: 第一段引入“bicycle”这个话题话题，第二段给出“bicycle”的优点，第三段给出其缺点，第四段在收尾的同时，给出自己的看法，即“bicycle”利大于弊

2. 优势advantages

（1）骑车对身体有好处

普通版：is good for our health

升级版：contribute to our health

燃烧卡路里  burn calories

锻炼身体的协调能力 train our hand-eye-feet coordination

减肥 the best sport for overweight people

（2）骑车很环保

Environment-friendly

（3）塞车时，骑车很方便

Due to traffic congestion, cycling is the quickest way to reach your destination

（4）骑车很安全

Even in the event of such an accident, people involved usually get away with a few scratches at the worst.

3. 劣势 disadvantages

（1）不能遮风挡雨

Bicycles can not shield against rain or dust

（2）坐垫不舒服

The saddle is usually uncomfortable

（3）不适合长距离旅行

Unfit for long distance travel

4.观点：支持自行车

Bicycles never fail to fascinate me.

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