提问类作文分段写法介绍-第四段

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第四段：阐述“mass media”中第三类对年轻人有危害的内容

Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisements in all forms of media to purchase unnecessary products or spend hours practicing some new ways of keeping fit, which lead to a vast waste of time and money.

雅思写作的高分亮点：零星出现的复杂句式

<句型升级>

so…that…句型

普通版

Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.

升级版

Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisements in all forms of media.

1.将原本十分普通的so…that句型改成倒装句，可以让句型结构变得更加多样化，满足“句式多变”这条雅思高分作文必须满足的要求。

2.在非常有亮点的倒装句之后，再连接一个定语从句

Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisements in all forms of media to purchase unnecessary products or spend hours practicing some new ways of keeping fit, which lead to a vast waste of time and money.

a vast waste of … 巨大的浪费

waste:

absolute(绝对的), utter(绝对的), colossal(巨大的), tremendous(巨大的), awful(可怕的), criminal(无耻的), senseless(无意义的), shocking(惊人的), conspicuous(明显的),tragic(可悲的)

Moreover, the omnipresent adverts tempt youngsters to pursuit luxurious lifestyles, which are not only unrealistic but also likely to lead teenagers astray.

omnipresent 无处不在的

tempt sb to do sth 引诱某人去做

lead sb astray 引导某人误入歧途

The omnipresent celebrity gossipy news online tempt young people to become famous at all costs and by all methods, which not only has a deleterious effect on their development but is also likely to lead them astray.

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