“what提问”类雅思作文分段写作（2）

第二段：阐述“mass media”中第一类对年轻人有危害的内容

To begin with, the mass media has become a source of violent scenes and gruesome reports.

to begin with 首先

violent scene and gruesome reports 暴力场面和血腥的报道

Today’s television programs, for example, are filled with violence and gory sights.

血腥场面：gory sights = gruesome scene

雅思作文中，应该尽量避免重复使用同一个形容词

Studies have shown that by the age of 18, children, on average, have watched 7000 robberies, 5000 murders and 3000 car chases on TV.

robbery抢劫 murder谋杀 car chase 追车

What is more, crimes and criminals are often glorified; the victims and sufferings are usually ignored in those programs, for audiences are more interested in the fighting action than the dire consequences.

分号引导并列句

可怕的后果 dire consequence

可怕的报道 gruesome report

可怕的：terribly, horrendous, horrent, fearsome, dreadful,

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