雅思写作科技类及教育类话题备考

雅思写作科技类话题，尤其是和孩子成长教育相挂钩的话题，每年都会考到，一直是重点准备的话题。

2016年全年一共考了6次科技类话题和8次教育类话题，而2016年雅思考试的总场数是48次，所以，同学们自己可以算一下科技类和教育类话题加在一起14次所占的比重，就会知道我们到底要多专注这两类话题。

题目：

somepeoplethinkthatplayingcomputergamesonlyhavenegativeeffectsonchildren,whileothersbelievethatitmayalsohavepositiveinfluenceonchildren'sdevelopment.discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

范文结构解析

第一段：先陈述电脑游戏越来越受欢迎这一现象，然后明确表达自己的观点"打电玩的好处是不可以忽略的。"

第二段：详细阐述玩电脑游戏的好处之一：刺激大脑的开发。

第三段：详细阐述玩电脑游戏的好处之二：就业的时候可以选择游戏制作等相关行业。如"微微一笑很倾城"里的肖奈大神，你们懂的。

第四段：详细阐述玩电脑游戏的好处之三：游戏里设计的一些互动也可以使内向的青少年变得善谈。

第五段：简要提出反方观点：打游戏对视力不好，并且耗时较多。

第六段：结尾段，再次用新颖的语言明确阐明自己的观点，并针对打游戏的问题扼要提出解决方案，结尾段升华了。

原版范文

考生可以先一口气读一遍没有做笔记的原文，然后我们再详细标注一下可以吸收的点。

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Variouscomputergameshavegainedtremendouspopularityamongchildrennowadays.Althoughthenegativeimpactsonchildrenaregenerallyacknowledged,theblessingsofplayingcomputergamesarejusttooobvioustobeignored.

Anadvantageisthatthispracticecantriggerthehealthyactivitiesintheirbrains.Asgamesrequireabilitiessuchasdecision-making,problem-solvingandrationalplanning,tomentionbutafew,acircumstanceisthatsomeofthesementalabilitiescanbeconsciouslyandeffectivelycultivatedinthegamesinsteadofinclass.

Anotherpointthatshouldbenoticedisthattheindustryofonlinegameshasbecomesoprosperousthatnumerousjobsemergedrelatedtothegameproduction.Agrowingnumberofgameplayersaredevotingthemselvestotheprofessionofgameindustry.SomeofthemevenbecomemillionairessuchastheCEOofEvochronAlliance.Onlythosewhoperformwellincertainsophisticatedgamescanstandbetterchancesinhuntingasatisfactoryjobrelevantwithonlinegamesinthisseverely-competingemploymentmarket.

Inaddition,lackofpersonalskillsisoneofthemostseriousdefectsthatwehaveeverknownabouttoday’sstudents.Somecomputergameshavealreadyallowedtheplayerstocommunicateandinteractwitheachotherinthecommunitydesignedinthegame.Onebenefitisthatchildrenwhooriginallydarednottosocializewithstrangersarealreadywillingtoandabletohavesocialintercoursewithothers.Thus,itisnotsurprisingthattheybecomemoreextrovertedandconversable.

However,undernocircumstancescanweignorethedownsidesofplayingcomputergames.Itisundoubtedlydetrimentaltothechildren’seye-sightiftheysitinfrontofthescreenforalongtimeanditissotime-consumingastheyareeagertoupgradetheirlevelsthatparentsandteacherswillwithoutadoubtcomplainaboutthetimewastedonthegames.

Inconclusion,althoughweshouldnotslackenourvigilanceagainstthedrawbacksofplayingcomputergames,thepositivefunctionsofitshouldalsobesufficientlyrecognized.Itwouldthusbehooveparentsandteacherstoshouldertheirresponsibilitiestocultivatethechildren’stimemanagementskill,makingthemabletokeepabalancebetweengameandlife.

解析版范文

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Variouscomputergameshavegainedtremendouspopularity(获得巨大的流行度，常用短语，代替sthhasbecomemoreandmorepopular这种俗的有伤风化的短语)

amongchildrennowadays.Althoughthenegativeimpactsonchildrenaregenerallyacknowledged,theblessings(可代替advantages)ofplayingcomputergamesarejusttooobvioustobeignored(写作常用观点句).

Anadvantageisthatthispracticecan(写作常用结构句)triggerthehealthyactivitiesintheirbrains(电脑相关话题常用的观点---刺激大脑的健康活动).

Asgamesrequireabilitiessuchasdecision-making,problem-solvingandrationalplanning(观点延深的办法之一---并列举例),tomentionbutafew,(常用插入语)acircumstanceisthatsomeofthesementalabilitiescanbeconsciouslyandeffectively(多用副词可加分)cultivated(培养---写作必备单词)inthegamesinsteadofinclass.

Anotherpointthatshouldbenoticedisthat(写作常用结构句)theindustryofonlinegames(谈到电玩我们必须要谈谈现在特别火的游戏产业)hasbecomesoprosperousthatnumerousjobsemergedrelatedtothegameproduction.Agrowingnumberofgameplayersaredevotingthemselvesto(献身于)theprofessionofgameindustry.

SomeofthemevenbecomemillionairessuchastheCEOofEvochronAlliance.Onlythosewhoperformwellincertainsophisticatedgamescanstandbetterchancesinhunting(这个短语要学会用---更有机会做某事)asatisfactoryjobrelevantwithonlinegamesinthisseverely-competingemploymentmarket.

Inaddition,lackofpersonalskillsisoneofthemostseriousdefects(缺陷)thatwehaveeverknown(多用完成时可加分)abouttoday’sstudents.Somecomputergameshavealreadyallowedtheplayerstocommunicateandinteractwith(互动)eachotherinthecommunitydesignedinthegame.

Onebenefitisthatchildrenwhooriginallydarednottosocializewith(社交)strangersarealreadywillingtoandableto(这种并列结构可以学着用)havesocialintercoursewith(把动词名词化使用)others.Thus,itisnotsurprisingthat(写作常用过渡句)theybecomemoreextrovertedandconversable(外向和健谈).

However,undernocircumstancescanweignorethedownsidesof(用倒装来表达的写作结构句)playingcomputergames.Itisundoubtedlydetrimental(加分副词和形容词放在一起了)tothechildren’seye-sightiftheysitinfrontofthescreenforalongtimeanditissotime-consuming(耗时的)astheyareeagertoupgradetheirlevelsthatparentsandteacherswillwithoutadoubt(插入语要用得自然)complainaboutthetimewastedonthegames.

Inconclusion,althoughweshouldnotslackenourvigilanceagainstthedrawbacksof(大作文高分级别结构句---尽管我们不能削弱对什么什么东西的警觉性)playingcomputergames,thepositivefunctionsofitshouldalsobesufficientlyrecognized(高分结构句).

Itwouldthusbehoove(外教喜欢用这个词表示某人应该做某事)parentsandteacherstoshouldertheirresponsibilitiestocultivatethechildren’stimemanagementskill,makingthemabletokeepabalancebetweengameandlife(提出问题的解决方案，结尾段升华了亲们!).

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